The Disruption (OOC)

I saw TM in the chatbox today. I was too late, though, he had gone afk.

Well, that sort of thing happens.

Just tonight, I've started working on a little project. Well, I guess it's really a rather big one.

As you know, due to the nature of roleplaying, sometimes the story can get a bit mixed up and spread out all over the place, and it's hard to tell what's happening when. What I'm doing is copying and everything from the second chapter of the Disruption into a word document, and editing everything so as to form a coherent and ordered storyline. I may post it later in the history section (in chapters), if there's no objection. As well as figuring out what to stick where, cleaning up grammar, and whatnot, I'm going to be eliminating certain ideas, like the Mondarian attempt to listen in to the one Confederacy meeting, that didn't go anywhere, and I will certainly alter some of my own parts (and possibly other people's) to make them fit better with each other. I'll certainly be trying to improve on what I myself did; I have to admit that some of my stuff was rather mediocre and could have been better.

Anyways, that's what I'm up to, amongst other things. Just lettin' y'all know. Cheers!

1.Character Name: Diesel
2. Character Decription: Strong, green skin, about the size of an adult, from the top ofhis nose to the top of his head is machine( which allows him to tolerate much pain)
3. Character History: Diesel's past was forgotten due to his crash. All he can remember is his name and his mission, to rebuild his kind with a sample of his blood. What he forgot is that his kind was a savage, war hungry, murderous race that could not be trusted.
4. Other: he not much different than his race, but that was before the crash. Now, he is sort of the opposite: honorable, trust worthy, and a little crazy.

I for one absolutely support tonysaur's project. I think it's a great idea, and I'd love to see more storylines "unified" like that, and maybe placed in the story section.

I agree with this.

Tony, if there's anything I can recommend, it's that we add in Krathunians fighting during Vathoris. I can write it all up and you can adjust it as necessary, but I think it's just a hole in the plot due to my absence at the time.

If you want to send me something, by all means do so. All I've done so far is the Prologues. Things are a bit slow with this, but I think I can pick it up again in a few days.

Sorry for the double-post. Just letting people know that I'm going to be altering my last Jiiran post.

@Whoster and Darkel. I got your PM. I'll answer you both tomorrow.

EDIT: I've edited my last post with Jiiran. I'll try to do better. I'm afraid I didn't catch the one part about the HUD. Sorry.

Hey, Whoster, there's an enormous mystery fleet in Jorro'kil territory. I'm sending in some guys to get involved in the main plot.

Okay. Can you maybe not make your posts such huge walls of textual intimidation?

I usually format paragraphs based on what they contain, although I can break up the paragraphs so they're smaller.

EDIT: The paragraphs have been broken in half to make them shorter.

Lol, thanks, but I already read it. Hm, I'll start thinking of a reply.

Dang, Vipes. I'm at a loss at how to respond to this. You kind of just showed up... I don't even know what system this should be in. I'll rack my brains for something..

@ViperaUnion While Whoster's thinking about things, maybe I could have a Markovan vessel on a routine trade mission pass by this mysterious fleet.

Whoster and I have *something* planned out for that, you may want to consult with him as well.

If you have something planned already, then never mind. That's fine.

By the way, a while back, if anyone remembers, we were all talking about who we would like to play the voices of our characters. For Admiral Marr, I originally said I wanted Vincent Price (an impossibility, since he's no longer alive). However, I've changed my mind. I would like Admiral Marr to be played by Mark Hamill doing his Joker/Hobgoblin voice. You just can't beat that evil laugh. Whenever I imagine Marr laughing, this is almost exactly how he sounds:

Whatever happens, I don't really know. I haven't been able to post also because I've had an important project to keep track of, and it's consumed a huge amount of my time. I'll have more free time this afternoon, though.

Alright, it's fine.

And just before Whoster takes this, a certain James Spader would voice Vasorin.

Dangit man. I had someone else in mind for him to voice..

Like Silus.

Benedict Cumberbatch would voice Kradus, without a doubt.

Nice choice, Darkel.

I think I'll change another one of my choices from earlier. Instead of Mel Blanc (who is also dead), I would have Mott Gatiir be voiced by Billy Crystal.

Okay, so can you guys please post a response to my alien fleet? It's IC-blocking me, and Darkel said we needed some of my guys in the main plot.

If there's not a reply soon I may interject with my own races.

If Whoster and Zaroas have no objection, I could do the thing I suggested with the Markovan trading vessel. If Zar and Whost' will give the OK on that, I could do it right away.

No thanks, we'll be posting soon.